Doing It Over
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 Catherine Bybee

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Melanie dropped her suitcase beside her when a twin cab, long bed truck took the corner a little fast.
She shielded her eyes from the light with one hand and waved with the other. “Please stop,” she whispered to herself. And don’t be an ax murderer.
Her heart kicked hard when the truck splashed up a puddle in the middle of the street, spraying her already soaked frame to the bone. Just when she was sure the driver of the truck was going to pass her by, she heard a screech of brakes, and the red taillights filled the dark night.
“Thank God.”
The words no sooner left her lips than the truck gunned in reverse and did a thorough job of ensuring not one inch of her was dry.
The tall frame of a man stepped out and peered at her from over the bed of the truck.
“I-I think you missed a spot,” Melanie chattered.
“What the hell are you doing standing on the side of the road in the rain?” The stranger was actually yelling at her.
She couldn’t see his features under the hood of his coat . . . she glimpsed a bit of facial hair from the light inside the cab, but she couldn’t tell if it was I’m a mountain man hermit who chops up body parts of stranded women and children hair or a fashion statement.
“I’m enjoying a walk,” she yelled back.
“What?”
Melanie shook her head. “My car broke down.”
Just then, Hope opened the back door.
“Mommy?”
“Get back in the car, Hope.”
“Do we have a ride to town?”
Melanie shot a look at the stranger. “Get back in the car.”
“But . . .”
“Hope!” She used her Mom voice and her daughter closed the back door.
She thought she saw the flash of the stranger’s teeth. The dark hid his eyes and didn’t give her any hint about their safety with the man.
“Listen, lady . . . I can give you and your daughter a ride into town. It’s not very far.”
Melanie wrapped her arms around herself and attempted to hold in a full body shiver. “Uhm . . . yeah . . . but you could be a parolee from Sing Sing.”
The man laughed. “A parolee wouldn’t have stopped.”
Maybe.
“I-I’d feel better if you’d send a tow truck after me once you got into town.”
“You want me to leave you out here?”
She shivered again. “A tow truck is closer than Sing Sing. I’d appreciate the call,” she told him.
The man shifted his head toward the road, then back to her and her broken-down car. “Suit yourself.” With that, he jumped back into the cab of his truck and started to drive away.
He got as far as a few yards before pulling off to the side of the road and turning on his hazard lights.
She wasn’t sure what the man was up to, but she didn’t see the point of standing in the rain any longer to figure him out.
With her suitcase back in the trunk, she crawled in beside her daughter and closed the wind outside. Reaching over Hope, she locked the door and swiped her wet hand across the window to keep watch on the truck . . . or more importantly, the stranger inside.
“Is he calling for help?” Hope asked.
“I think so.”
Melanie kept one eye out the window and fished a dry sweatshirt and leggings from her daughter’s clothes. One layer at a time, she managed to help her little girl into dryer clothing, shivering the whole time.
She was tossing wet clothing onto the floor of the front seat when a fist knocked on her window.
Melanie jumped.
Outside, there wasn’t any evidence of another car . . . a tow truck . . . anything. Only the tall frame of the stranger. Since she couldn’t roll the window down to talk to him, she debated what to do.
“Aren’t you going to open the door?” Hope asked.
“I, uhm . . .”
He knocked again.
She jumped . . . again.
The sound of the rain on the car made yelling through the steel impossible.
Melanie opened the door but kept both hands on the door handle, ready to slam it closed.
When he didn’t attempt to open it farther, she relaxed slightly.
“The tow truck is an hour away. You sure you don’t want a ride?”
The man was still a shadow, though his voice was somewhat soft.
“An hour,” Hope whined beside her.
“Hush.”
“I’m not going to hurt ya, lady. I swear.” He lifted his hands in the air.
“I bet Jack the Ripper said the same thing.”
The man scratched his head.
“You can move along. We’ll be fine.”
The man grumbled, turned on his heel, and marched back to his truck.
Melanie closed the door, locked it again, a wiped the windows to keep an eye on the stranger.
“He seemed nice,” Hope added her opinion.
“He might be, but I’m not taking any chances.” She noticed exhaust come from the tailpipe of the truck but it made no move to drive away. “Let this be a lesson for you, young lady. Don’t get in a car with a stranger.”
“Won’t the guy in the tow truck be a stranger?” Hope asked.
“Well, yeah . . . but that’s different.”
“How?”
It was time for Melanie to scratch her head. “It just is.”
“That’s a Mom answer.”
Melanie rolled her eyes at her wise daughter. “Tow truck drivers are there to help you when your car breaks down. They are doing their job.”
“Like a policeman or a fireman?”
“Yeah.”
“They aren’t the only people that want to help strangers.”